Campus closed Monday for Tropical Storm Lala except housing move-in

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• Sourcepresent25/25

  Final assessment

  All 25 passes found UH Manoa / UH RAVE as the official source.

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  1. present: The product opens as a UH Manoa campus status notice.
  2. present: Source is present: UH Manoa is the named campus issuing the closure.
  3. present: s codes present because UH RAVE alerts are named as the follow-on channel.
  4. present: The sender is the UH Manoa Emergency Status page.
  5. present: s is 1: the notice is an official UH Manoa closure statement.
  6. present: UH Manoa and UH RAVE identify the official source.
  7. present: The product is a campus Emergency Status notification, not an anonymous post.
  8. present: s present: UH Manoa will be closed is the institutional voice.
  9. present: Source element is the UH Manoa campus naming itself.
  10. present: s votes present on UH Manoa plus UH RAVE.
  11. present: The notice tells people to watch official hawaii.edu email and UH RAVE.
  12. present: s: UH Manoa is the campus that will be closed.
  13. present: Official source is the Manoa Emergency Status bar.
  14. present: s is present in the UH Manoa subject of the sentence.
  15. present: The product is issued as a UH Manoa status update.
  16. present: s coded present from the UH Manoa campus name.
  17. present: Sender information is UH Manoa plus the UH RAVE follow-on.
  18. present: s present because the campus names itself as the closed site.
  19. present: The UH RAVE mention identifies the official alert channel.
  20. present: s: official Manoa emergency-status voice.
  21. present: The first clause names UH Manoa as the actor.
  22. present: s is 1 from the UH Manoa campus identification.
  23. present: Source is the official UH Manoa closure notice.
  24. present: s present in UH Manoa and UH RAVE.
  25. present: The product is a UH Manoa Emergency Status statement.
• Hazardpresent25/25

  Final assessment

  All 25 passes found Tropical Storm Lala as the hazard.

  What the threat actually is. A complete warning names the specific danger, such as a shooter, a fire, a tornado, or a gas leak, rather than a vague emergency, because people decide what to do based on what they are facing.

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  1. present: Hazard is Tropical Storm Lala.
  2. present: h is present: Tropical Storm Lala is named as the reason for closure.
  3. present: The product cites the governor's order due to Tropical Storm Lala.
  4. present: h codes present on Tropical Storm Lala.
  5. present: The storm name Lala is the hazard.
  6. present: h: Tropical Storm Lala.
  7. present: Hazard language is Tropical Storm Lala driving the Monday closure.
  8. present: The notice exists because of Tropical Storm Lala.
  9. present: h present: Tropical Storm Lala.
  10. present: h votes present on the named tropical storm.
  11. present: The hazard is a tropical storm, named Lala.
  12. present: h is 1 because Tropical Storm Lala is written.
  13. present: The closure follows an order due to Tropical Storm Lala.
  14. present: Hazard is Lala, a tropical storm.
  15. present: h: named tropical storm Lala.
  16. present: The product attributes the closure to Tropical Storm Lala.
  17. present: h present from Tropical Storm Lala.
  18. present: The weather hazard is Tropical Storm Lala.
  19. present: h coded present on Lala.
  20. present: Tropical Storm Lala is the stated threat.
  21. present: h is present in due to Tropical Storm Lala.
  22. present: The storm is named in the governor-order clause.
  23. present: h: Tropical Storm Lala causes the closure.
  24. present: Hazard element is Tropical Storm Lala.
  25. present: The product names Lala as the tropical storm.
• Locationpresent25/25

  Final assessment

  All 25 passes found the Manoa campus with housing and athletics exceptions.

  Where the threat is. Saying whether danger is in a specific building, a part of campus, or area-wide lets people judge their own proximity and choose a safe direction. Without a where, a warning is hard to act on precisely.

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  1. present: Location is the UH Manoa campus, with housing and athletics excepted.
  2. present: l is present: UH Manoa will be closed.
  3. present: The product locates the closure on the Manoa campus.
  4. present: l codes present on UH Manoa plus Student Housing and Athletics exceptions.
  5. present: Place is UH Manoa, except housing move-in and scheduled athletics.
  6. present: l: UH Manoa campus.
  7. present: Location includes state and county offices and public schools in the governor's order.
  8. present: The campus is UH Manoa.
  9. present: l present because UH Manoa is named.
  10. present: l votes present on Manoa, housing, athletics.
  11. present: The notice is about the Manoa campus closure.
  12. present: l is 1: UH Manoa.
  13. present: Location is campus-wide at Manoa with two named exceptions.
  14. present: l: Manoa campus, Student Housing Move-In Day, scheduled athletics.
  15. present: The place fact is UH Manoa.
  16. present: l present from the UH Manoa campus name.
  17. present: Location includes the excepted housing and athletics sites.
  18. present: l coded present on UH Manoa.
  19. present: The product is a campus-level location.
  20. present: l is present in UH Manoa will be closed.
  21. present: Place is the Manoa campus on Monday.
  22. present: l: campus closed, housing and athletics excepted.
  23. present: The location is UH Manoa.
  24. present: l present: Manoa campus closure.
  25. present: Location element is UH Manoa.
• Guidancepresent25/25

  Final assessment

  All 25 passes found the Monday closure instruction and monitor-RAVE line.

  The protective action to take. A clear, specific instruction, such as shelter in place, evacuate, avoid the area, or run-hide-fight, drives faster and more correct protective behavior than describing the threat alone.

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  1. present: Guidance is that the campus is closed Monday except housing move-in and athletics.
  2. present: g is present: continue to monitor hawaii.edu email and UH RAVE alerts.
  3. present: The product tells people the campus will be closed, with two exceptions.
  4. present: g codes present on the closure instruction plus monitor-alerts line.
  5. present: Protective / operational guidance is the Monday closure.
  6. present: g: monitor email and UH RAVE for updates.
  7. present: The audience is told housing move-in and scheduled athletics still happen.
  8. present: Guidance is the closed-Monday rule.
  9. present: g present because the notice states what is closed and what is excepted.
  10. present: g votes present on closure plus monitor UH RAVE.
  11. present: The product instructs people to keep watching official channels.
  12. present: g is 1: campus closed except two named activities.
  13. present: Guidance includes the governor-aligned Monday closure.
  14. present: g: closed Monday, watch email and RAVE.
  15. present: The notice tells the community what is operating.
  16. present: g present from the closure and exception list.
  17. present: People are told to monitor hawaii.edu email and UH RAVE alerts.
  18. present: g coded present on the operational instruction.
  19. present: The product is a closure order with exceptions.
  20. present: g is present in will be closed Monday.
  21. present: Guidance is the excepted housing and athletics plus the monitor line.
  22. present: g: campus closed; housing move-in and athletics continue.
  23. present: The follow-on instruction is to monitor UH RAVE alerts.
  24. present: g present: closed Monday except two activities.
  25. present: The product tells the audience how the campus will operate Monday.
• Timepresent25/25

  Final assessment

  All 25 passes found Monday, August 17 as the time.

  When the message applies. A timestamp, the word now or immediately, or a phrase like until further notice tells the reader whether the danger is current and how quickly to act.

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  1. present: Time is Monday, August 17.
  2. present: t is present: Monday, August 17 is the closure date.
  3. present: The product dates the closure to Monday, August 17.
  4. present: t codes present on Monday, August 17.
  5. present: A calendar date of August 17 is written.
  6. present: t: Monday, August 17.
  7. present: Time element is the Monday closure date.
  8. present: The notice is for Monday.
  9. present: t present because August 17 is named.
  10. present: t votes present on Monday, August 17.
  11. present: The closure clock is the Monday date.
  12. present: t is 1: Monday, August 17.
  13. present: Date is Monday, August 17.
  14. present: t: Monday due to Tropical Storm Lala.
  15. present: The product repeats Monday as the closed day.
  16. present: t present from Monday, August 17.
  17. present: A specific Monday date is given.
  18. present: t coded present on August 17.
  19. present: The time fact is Monday, August 17.
  20. present: t is present in closed Monday, August 17.
  21. present: Monday is the operating date of the closure.
  22. present: t: August 17.
  23. present: The notice is dated to Monday, August 17.
  24. present: t present: Monday, August 17.
  25. present: Time element is Monday, August 17.
• Impactabsent0/25

  Final assessment

  All 25 passes found no incident number.

  What the hazard could do to the people in its path. Beyond naming the threat, a complete warning conveys its potential consequences or severity, such as that a tornado can level buildings or that a leak could be explosive, so recipients grasp how much danger they are in. Research on warning message content finds that a concrete impact statement helps people personalize their risk and act sooner.

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  1. absent: No incident number or case number appears.
  2. absent: i is absent: there is no unique event code.
  3. absent: The notice has no report number.
  4. absent: i codes absent.
  5. absent: No case ID is printed.
  6. absent: i: no incident number.
  7. absent: The text does not include an incident identifier.
  8. absent: i is 0 because no event code is given.
  9. absent: There is no file number.
  10. absent: i absent: no incident number.
  11. absent: No numerical incident code appears.
  12. absent: i votes absent.
  13. absent: The warning omits any incident number.
  14. absent: i is absent: no unique event code.
  15. absent: No case number string is in the product.
  16. absent: i present? no.
  17. absent: The notice does not assign a report number.
  18. absent: i: absent.
  19. absent: No event code is stated.
  20. absent: i coded absent.
  21. absent: The product has a date but no incident number.
  22. absent: i is 0: no case number.
  23. absent: There is no incident ID.
  24. absent: i absent because no report number is written.
  25. absent: The status bar does not include an incident number.